Archie at Riverdale High (Vol. 1), Issue #66

Welcome to Archieness & Riverdalers Presents: Archie at Riverdale High (Vol. 1), Issue #66!


Archie at Riverdale High (Vol. 1), Issue #66 [September, 1979]

Archie at Riverdale High (Vol. 1), Issue #66


”With Flying Colors”

Archie has a story to tell! It all started when he and Chuck had really been getting into shape for the Big Competition. Or whatever!

“I feel in tip-top shape!” says Chuck. “How about you?”

“Great!” yells Archie. He goes for one more pole vault and then opts to rest and relax. Like a swan. Like a gazelle. Like a majestic mongoose. Archie vaults over the bar.

“Boys, even if you don’t take first place, at least beat Westside High,” says Coach Kleats. Coach Kleats is fat and washed-up. “Their crumbum coach, Mike Torgen, will never let me forget it if we don’t!”

Oh man, we can’t let a guy named “Mike Torgen” make a fool out of Riverdale High! Archie is on board with whatever it takes to skunk the Torgen. Meanwhile, two spies from Westside High (YOU CAN TELL BECAUSE THEY WEAR SHIRTS WITH LARGE “W’s” ON THEM) are getting nervous. Riverdale sure looks athletic and sweaty and glistening and succulent. They report their findings to Coach MIKE TORGEN, who has an Inspector Clouseau hat and mustache, and he looks angry. The fifty-yard dash and the pole vault. Nuh-uh, Riverdale. Those are Westside’s events! They need ‘em badly like they need a fine lady with large titties! Grrrr! Archie and Chuck are fucking everything up!

Well, these two Westdale punks will do anything to appease Coach Torgen. But they have no ideas, so they decide to take Dad’s boat out to the water. Good environment to rack the ol’ brains.

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Wait a minute, then why did we drive six hours to the ocean?! Stupid, stupid, stupid!

As “luck” would have it, Archie and Chuck had the same idea to head to the ocean to do a little boating themselves. Rowboating, that is! With canoes and oars and shit. And they dangerously stray far from shore. “Yeah, but it’s nice and cool out here!” says Brain-Genius Archibald Andrews.

Little do our heroes know that the two douchebags from Westside High – let’s call them Geronimo and Jormpus – notice them rowboatin’ without a care in the world. “Y’know, if they was stranded on a dune island without a boat!” Jormpus thinks. And Geronimo finishes the thought: “They’d miss the meet!”

Ha! This is just what Coach Michael R. R. Torgen needs! Their grand plan is to plow right into the canoe, killing Archie and Chuck instantly. In fact, they hit the canoe so hard that Archie and Chuck go flying forty feet! “Those screwballs!” Archie says. Screwballs! You can tell Archie is upset when he uses such foul language!

“That was deliberate!” Archie yells. “They’re washing our canoe away from the island!”

And indeed, Jormpus and Geronimo have successfully stranded Archie and Chuck on an island and away from the meet! Success! HA HA HA!! Fuck ‘em.

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Boy, boys, put the knives away!

As the meet proceeds, Kleats gets hella nervous! The rest of the 900 boys aren’t meeting expectations! “Without Chuck and Archie we’ll lose their events and we’ll be sunk!”

Too bad Chuck and Archie decided to play Canoe Boys instead of just hanging around at home drinking their protein shakes and icing their glutes. If they swam to shore, they would be too tired to pole vault! And if they stayed on the island, they’d miss the meet! And if they filled their pockets with rocks and walked into the water, they’ll die! All the options are bunk!

However, in the most immense of plot holes, the duo see a kid hang gliding and remember that “Steve Mosburg teaches hang gliding out on the island.” And Steve Mosburg is a stand-up guy! He’ll teach them hang gliding in about fourteen seconds and then they can hang glide right to the fucking meet! Brain Genius!

Steve Mosburg looks like a goddamn nerd. He lets them take a couple of gliders and pretty soon Archie and Chuck are flying their way back to dry land. It’s really stupid and it’s making me hate comics forever.

“If the air currents are kind to us, we can still make it, Chuck!”

“Right on, Arch!”

These dorks deserve to nosedive right into a fucking rock, but they instead land right on the field gracefully without incident.

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Spread your legs, ladies! We’re home!

“Well, it was a happy Coach Kleats who watched Chuck take his events!” Archie narrates. “And a sad Coach Torgen who saw me top his best vaulter by six inches! Well, we won the meet by a narrow margin, and everybody gave us credit!”

And by “everyone”, Archie means Dilton, Veronica, and Betty. They call them “heroes”. No Jughead, though, he’s hunched in a corner somewhere scarfing a hamburger.

“Hey, sure, boys! I’m glad you won!” says Coach Kleats. “But next time – do me a favor, will you?”

“A favor, coach?”

“Skip the dramatic entrance? Walk through the gate like everybody else!”

HA HA HA HA HA!! HA HA HA HA HA!! HA HA HA HA HA!! HA HA HA HA HA!! HA HA HA HA HA!! HA HA HA HA HA!! HA HA HA HA HA!! HA HA HA HA HA!! HA HA HA HA HA!! HA HA HA HA HA!! HA HA HA HA HA!! HA HA HA HA HA!! HA HA HA HA HA!! HA HA HA HA HA!!


”Big Brother”

Veronica almost gets hit by a tree branch! This is, perhaps, supposed to create some suspense for the reader to want to keep reading. It doesn’t work for me, but I’m trying to write a blog here, so I’ll keep reading so that you don’t have to.

“It all started one summer morning as Ronnie and I were picking up some supplies for our school day camp!” Archie starts his story boringly. They witness a little kid banging on the locked gate with a rock. Always the goody-goody, Archie yells at him and tells him that this is school property and how dare you! He holds the kid by the scruff and demands an answer as to why he was trying to break into the school grounds.

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Right on, kid! Cow tipping? Fire crackers in the cat’s anus? There’s only so much of that you can do!

“I turned on a fire hydrant on Sand Street to cool off, and a policeman chased me away!” the kid says after bitching about how boring Riverdale is. The kid is named Butch Morgan and he lives in the fuckin’ projects, right in between two stash houses! Veronica calls him a troublemaker and urges Archie to grab him by the ear and drag him back home to his heroin-addicted parents!

Archie has an idea: “Say, if you have nothing to do how would you like to be my guest at our camp today?” Are you fucking kidding me, geek? Butch is going to light firecrackers in your anus just for even suggesting such a dorky goddamned–

“What’s that?” Butch asks, intrigued.

“A day camp that has all kinds of activities you can have fun doing!” Archie responds jubilantly! Butch has angry eyebrows but agrees to allow Archie to drag his ass to Homo Camp (his words, not mine, I promise, lol).

Veronica is suspicious… “I think you’re crazy, Archie,” she says with an obvious air of snootiness. Archie is optimistic that THIS RIGHT HERE RIGHT NOW will dissuade Butch away from a life of vandalism and debauchery. Butch hops in Archie’s ugly car and gets kidnapped and murdered.

Mr. Weatherbee stands outside the Day Camp office dressed like a circus tent. He introduces Butch to him, and Weatherbee couldn’t be more delighted to let this young ruffian run rampant around the camp creating havoc and destruction.

“Bringing him here was a nice gesture on your part, Archie!” says Weatherbee.

“I think he’s basically a nice kid!” responds Archie with the naivety of a five-year-old girl.

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Oh god, the balloon was filled with horse piss!

Butch drops a water balloon on Veronica, and she starts chasing him around promising a spankin’. This is illegal in most states, but what year is this again? 1979? Yeah, never mind, child abuse was very much legal. Even encouraged! Anyway, as a token of apology, Butch offers a stick of gum. Veronica hungrily accepts it like a complete idiot – never accept gum from a ruffian! Who knows what nefarious additives are within?!

“WATER! SOMEBODY PLEASE GIVE ME WATER! IT WAS FULL OF HOT PEPPER!” Veronica runs around like a loon while Archie stands there unhelpfully in his short khaki pants. Veronica sucks down a hose. Betty calls the kid “weird”.

A barrage of pranks continues. A tripwire here, and hornet’s nest in the face there. “Archie Andrews!” yells Veronica. “I know that little creep was bad news! I tried to tell you not to bring him here, he doesn’t belong!”

Butch hides behind a tree, crestfallen. He most certainly has learned his lesson, right ladies and gentlemen? He runs away sniffing and crying like a little wuss shithead, leaving Archie to go find him and make all kinds of amends. “Come on,” Archie urges the gang. “We have to find him before he gets lost in these woods!” Personally, let the little kid get lost forever and turn into a pile of skeleton bones. See if I give HOOT!

Jughead decides to climb a mountain a hold onto a large branch to, you know, improve the lookout. It’s a dumb idea. Jughead is full of dumb ideas. The branch breaks and almost falls on Veronica, but Butch pushes her out of the way just in time! And now we’re at the beginning of the story! Thanks for reading!

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You love me? Then let me squeeze dem titties.

“I was only trying to get everyone to laugh so they would like me!” Butch says falsely. Throwing a hornet’s nest isn’t funny, son. You know why? Because it didn’t hit Archie! That would’ve been preferable.

Archie tells Butch that the secret is just being himself, which, as far as I’m concerned, he totally was anyway. And it was shitty! So none of these teenagers should be giving this kid the time of day.

“Come on, I’m going to reward you with ice cream!” Veronica says, grabbing the kid’s greasy hand. “You may be his big brother, Archie, but he turned out to be mine!”

Then Butch lit an M-80 and killed Veronica. The end.

Final Thoughts

”Dear Archie, I too am a juvenile delinquent! Do you have any tips for fucking up my neighbors’ shit?”

”Dear Juvenile Delinquent, you can try smashing their mailboxes with baseball bats! That’s a classic! Thanks for writing!”

Detective Comics (Vol. 1), Issue #658 – “Deciphered”

* Part 11 of 14 of the Batman: Prelude to Knightfall event *

Welcome to Loneliness & Cheeseburgers Presents: Detective Comics (Vol. 1), Issue #658 – “Deciphered”! In the previous installment of the Prelude to Knightfall story, Jean-Paul Garth Algar Azrael talks Robin into busting some heads at “Party On” Wayne Plaza because he’s bored at his security job where he spends all day keeping an eye on a stack of boxes and making sure it doesn’t fall down. Azrael almost kills a dude with a chainsaw, which alarms Robin, which in turn alarms Azrael. But we’ll work on him! He’s not really a killer! *snicker*

Meanwhile, Bruce Wayne is a wuss and can’t handle the stress of being Batman right now. Alfred tucked him into bed all cozy and put some The Young and the Restless on his TV. He also feeds him oatmeal.

What else is going on? Oh yeah, Lucius Fox is going to get murdered but I’m rooting for that, actually. Sounds like it’s really going to kick this story in the right direction!


Detective Comics (Vol. 1), Issue #658 [April, 1993]
Written by: Chuck Dixon
“Deciphered”

Detective Comics (Vol. 1), Issue #658

Fifteen minutes ago they were twenty minutes away from Pierside. This is actually a very good plot setup device. I like it when certain amount of minutes ago something will happen a certain amount of minutes from then.

“He’ll be there, Robin. He’ll be there and he’ll still be alive. I know Lucius Fox. He’s stronger than that. He’ll still be alive when we reach him.”

And, as I’ve already said, if Lucius Fox is a pile of decomposing bones when they show up then I’m fine with it. Why, here’s the scamp now getting hypnotized by that bald jerk. He’s got Lucius talking to his dad, and he’s making Lucius jump off a bridge and into the water. “BUT I CAN’T, DAD! I CAN’T SWIM!” Lucius says, which is such a dadgum racist stereotype that I’m positively sitting here eating mayonnaise and not being able to dance or jump about it. “Make me proud of you, son,” Lucius is told while he grips a bar on the bridge for dear life.

Eighteen hours ago, which is twenty hours from thirty-eight hours ago, some federal agents bust into Harvey Bullock’s interrogation room and tell the fat fucker that a judge’s signature allows them to take his perp away for questioning. Bullock’s like “HE’S ALREADY GETTING QUESTIONED” but the agents are like “not by you anymore, fatty”.

And not just him. Everyone that Bullock booked. Sorry, Charlie. Maybe next time you should have just stayed home and eaten Pringles.

Sixteen hours ago, which is actually twenty-one hours ago in Greenwich Mean Time, the FBI is seizing all of the files at WayneTech. Writs, warrants, orders, and hall passes say they can, so don’t do nothing about it, Lucious Foxy. Lucius asks, sirs, what the meaning of this is! And he is told “tough titties”.

Lucius calls a guy named Roth who tells him that all these break-ins at WayneTech are linked to the “suicides”. Guess what? They were part of the other two companies working on the Echo Project. That means you’re next, sailor! *hangs up phone with enough force to break desk*

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Certainly, sir. I shall “AIM” him in the “chat room” with my “screen name” after I add him to my “buddy list”.

Bruce Wayne tells Alfred to “put a message on Tim’s computer” (i.e. a sticky note on his Apple IIe monitor) that Batman and Robin will be going out tonight on a sexy date. “But you promised to concentrate on your business affairs for the next few days,” Alfred whines. Bruce’s eyes get dangerously fiery. “HOW DARE YOU QUESTION ME, CUNT??”

No, that would have been insane! What he actually says is that this is WayneTech business. “If I handle it as Bruce Wayne, we’ll be going to Lucius Fox’s funeral,” he mansplains. “Your concern is touching, Alfred. But it’s beginning to smack of mothering.”

“WELL, SOMEONE HAS TO MOTHER YOU AFTER YOUR REAL MOTHER WAS SHOT TO DEATH!!”

No, that would have been insane! What he actually says is nothing and goes back to frying up some delicious eggs.

Lucius is starting to panic and decides to lie down for a lunch nap. “Buzzing in my head… like a hornet’s nest…” he says… then he starts to hear sweet, sweet, beautiful music (Pantera).

Eight hours ago, which is fifty-six hours ago in dog hours, the hypnotist murderer gets his voice ready for his making-Lucius-Fox-jump-off-a-bridge debut. “I shall be at the peak of modulation and persuasiveness. After all, The Cypher has a reputation to uphold.”

THE CYPHER, you say! A fetching nickname! Is there a Mrs. Cypher? *tugs braid nervously*

Three hours ago, Batman and Robin drive by Azrael’s house to pick him up for a lovely dinner. “What can Azrael find out for us that you couldn’t find on your own?” Robin asks defiantly. After a couple of quick slaps on the tuchus, Batman politely tells the little wetnap that it would be suspicious of Bruce Wayne was nosing around the daily affairs of his own security force. “I wasn’t sure what role Azrael would play in the scheme of things, but he’s beginning to prove invaluable.

Once Azrael shows up, Batman briefs him on all sorts of boring shit I won’t repeat here. Basically, it’s LUCIUS IS GOING TO DIE BECAUSE THE OTHER GUYS IN CHARGE OF THE SUPER SECRET PROJECT ARE NOW DEAD. DID YOU SEE ANYONE UNUSUAL ON THE SECURITY TAPES? OH, A BALD MAN? LET’S GO GET HIM.

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Looking good, Robin! I couldn’t have drawn you better myself!

Batman and Robin are going to go find Lucius while Azrael jerks off and plays Grand Theft Auto V. Also, break into Lucius Fox’s office clandestinely and see if you can find anything. This is really just a mission to get you out of our hair. You’re bothering us, kid, is what we’re saying.

Two hours ago, Lucius Fox is like “I’m going out” and his daughter is like “But dad, you promised to help me with my calculus homework” and Lucius is like “HAAAAARRRRBABLAHABAB RAAAWWWWRRRHABAHABAHAAB” and I’m barely exaggerating.

“But when will you be back, Lucius?” his wife asks. “It’s so late.”

“I’LL GET BACK WHEN I GET BACK. NOW LEAVE ME ALONE!” *slams door*

Not at all suspicious if you ask me. His wife is like “he’s never yelled at me in my life, not even during Yell Sex”. She looks out the window at him, scared.

90 minutes ago (things are getting tense!), Batman calls Lucius’ wife and she says “he’s acting weird”. He also left the house and no one knows where he went. And Azrael hasn’t said anything in like ten hours so hopefully he didn’t die on the way to the office. Immediately after they wonder why Azrael hasn’t contacted them, Azrael contacts them. He found something! “I might even live to tell you about it,” he adds dramatically, then guys with guns show up to the office and Azrael almost doesn’t live to tell anyone about anything.

Time to call Jim Gordon to put out an APB on Lucius’ car (1970 AMC Gremlin).

60 minutes ago, I started getting bored! Also, the Cypher meets up with a fugued Lucius. “Listen to my voice. Listen to the music. We’ll talk about Echo Project and then we’ll talk about you.”

Cyper asks Lucius what he knows. He knows nothing, it’s all classified. “Tell me about yourself. Tell me about your childhood. You’re six years old. Tell me your greatest fear. Tell me your fondest wish.”

While things get cozy between Cypher and Lucius, Batman and Robin get cozy themselves. 45 minutes ago, Azrael gives them a tape of shitty muzak. “There has to be more to this,” Batman says, gritting his teeth. He sends the audio file to Alfred, who runs it through the Super Batcomputer Music Analyzer 4000. Even Alfred thinks the music sounds like garbage and he listens to a lot of Moby. The music appears to consist of three loud tracks and a quiet track that barely registers on the Batcomputer Decibel Counter. After throwing some switches, Alfred hears a whisper. Subliminal messages telling the listener to do what it says. Robin is starting to get entranced. “That voice… I could listen to it all night…”

Nope! They fast-forward and hear the command part of the recording, which tells the listener to meet Cypher at Pierside after midnight. Tell no one. Not even Batman. WAIT A MINUTE–

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Who are you again, kid? Beat it.

Five minutes ago, which is kind of where we started I guess if you were paying any attention, which I wasn’t, Lucius is gripping the bars on the bridge. “Jump into the water, son. It’s the only way you’ll learn.”

“LUCIUS! DON’T JUMP!” yells a voice.

“Who?” says Lucius.

“Damn,” says Cypher.

The End!

Cypher tells Lucius that the voice is coming from a Bad Man and that he shouldn’t listen and also jump in the fucking river. Robin kicks the radio out of Cypher’s hand. Batman goes to rescue Lucius, but he jumps before he can be stopped. Lucius snaps out of it midair, and it looks like he’s about to die!… but then Azrael (who didn’t go home as instructed and now he’ll get a spanking) swoops onto the scene with rope that’s tied to nothing and saves the jumping dude.

“I thought I told you to go home,” Batman says, not understanding that Azrael going home would have sucked for everyone.

“I would have lain awake all night wondering how this ended,” Azrael says. “I only meant to watch. Honestly.”

Batman pumps his butt full of Whoop-Ass and then thanks him for not going home. Then they hear sirens in the distance and decide to split.

Lucius gets wheeled into an ambulance while Cypher is read his rights. When asked to respond, Cypher can’t talk because he was kicked in the throat. He grits his teeth as the issue ends abruptly.

Final Thoughts

HARROWING AND SUSPENSEFUL, RIGHT FOLKS?? I like the part where the artist drew Robin like a Rorschach test and I laughed and laughed!

What’s next in this Prelude to Knightfall? I’m at the edge of my very tiny seat!

Astonishing X-Men (Vol. 3), Issue #17 – “Torn (Part 5)”

* Part 5 of 6 of the Torn storyline *

Welcome to Loneliness & Cheeseburgers Presents: Astonishing X-Men (Vol. 3) Issue #17 – “Torn (Part 5)”! In the previous installment, we learn that Colossus is the Breaker of Worlds.

Wolverine is still a scared little childlike boy, Beast is still feral, Colossus and Cyclops are still unconscious, so it seems that the onus falls on Kitty Pryde to save the day in the end. It’s going to take two more issues, so get comfortable.

Also, I’m writing this at home while my HVAC guy is fixing my shitty, fucked-up furnace, so I’m going to be more distracted than usual while writing. Not that it matters since none of this storyline makes sense to me anyway and YES, THE FILTER IS OLD! I ONLY CHANGE FILTERS LIKE ONCE A YEAR! I’M SORRY!


Astonishing X-Men (Vol. 3), Issue #17 [November, 2006]
Written by: Joss Whedon
“Torn (Part 5)”

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Aha, and just when I thought things were barely sorta making what I could almost call some semblance of sense, the first full-page spread is of Kitty Pryde and Peter Vladimir Colossus Putin welcoming a new child into the world! His name is Michael, and his superpower is pooping other people’s pants.

Her various friends show up to congratulate them! Wolverine wants a cigar! He also wonders why the kid isn’t named “Logan”. Oh, I know why! Because “Logan” is a sucky suck name.

Charles Xavier now enters the room looking like pedophilic Lex Luthor (which is pretty impressive considering Lex Luthor looks like a pedophilic Lex Luthor). “Can I get a look?” he asks. lol. You don’t get to look at anything of his, sir. Stay away from playgrounds while you’re at it.

The kid starts crying, so Kitty starts asking everyone to shove off so she can whip out her titties. Xavier makes an angry frowny face because, I’m guessing, he didn’t get to touch the kid. This is getting pretty grim, you guys.

Fast-forward to when Michael is learning how to walk. They wonder if the kid has powers even though, for the last two years, their pants have been mysterious filling up while shopping and/or at church!

Xavier floats in on his magic hovering wheelchair device that he cooked up himself MacGyver-style using flux capacitors and little child bones. “Put the boy down, Kitty,” he says menacingly as the rest of the A-Team X-Men saunter up. “I’m afraid it’s not safe.”

Kitty is alarmed! What are they doing?! Don’t take muh baby!

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The kid can sense child molesters. And… uh… this is a bad thing! Right?! Of course! Heh. Because… um…

Kitty is going to try to fight these losers off by, like, I don’t know, phasing through them or something? She tells Peter to hold them off for two minutes while she runs away from them.

But he’s in on it, too. “I’m sorry, Kitty,” he says raising a fist.

Fast-forward to maybe two days from now. Kitty phases an axe through Peter’s skull. “I’m sorry, Peter. You blink and I let go. Where is my son?”

He’s at Denny’s enjoying a Grand Slam Breakfast. Where the fuck else would he be?

After coming to terms with the fact that Kitty would straight-up murder him, Peter decides talking might be a good idea. “He needs to be isolated.” Oooooh, bad sentence. Kitty calls him a “big metal @#$%ing robot”.

“He’s in the basement. In a box. Go. I won’t try to stop you.”

Kitty cries big, fat tears as she moseys to the basement as if in a fugue state.

Let’s move out of this – what I can only assume to be – alternate reality and see what Agent Brand and her Merry Men are up to.

“So, it’s Frost,” she says.

“Mosssst like,” responds her lizard friend.

“Attacking her own team. Fury briefed me on that possibility.”

“There are… anomalies in my sensings…”

His/her “sensings” seem to indicate vague whiffs of Cassandra Nova, which come and go. Brand thinks that she might be blocking the lizard out.

Brand’s other buddy, the bald black guy that’s not Nick Fury because this guy doesn’t have an eyepatch and he isn’t yelling at everyone, reports that they have a visual on the mole eighty miles out.

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She’s not a tinker-toy! She’s Robot Medusa and I love her!

Ah yes, the A.I. that really fucked things up for everyone in the last storyline. “So Ord has an ally who’s not a moron,” Brand says, not asking it as a question.

The mole wants to have a chit-chat. It gets patched through to Brand’s Bluetooth, and she hears a bunch of gobbledygook from… surprise!… some sort of dragon hovering in the sky above Xavier’s School of Rejects and Child Molester Apologists.

Speaking of the school, Wolverine wakes up an exhausted, passed out Hisako. “Oh, won’t you please wake up!” Everyone else is asleep except Kitty, so he’s lonely and scared again.

Speaking of Kitty, she’s in the basement (I guess) looking for the box (I suppose) that’s shaped like a rhombic prism (from the last issue) and says “Mommy’s here.”

Blindfold is able to wake up Peter, who doesn’t have an axe through his head because I still think alternate realities might be happening here.

Nova is getting restless. Emma tells her to be patient. It is revealed that the version of Emma that Kitty trapped in the wall is actually – gasp! — an IMPOS-TOR.

YES, I KNOW I HAVEN’T CHANGED THE WATER FILTER IN ABOUT TWO YEARS! THEY DON’T MAKE THAT WATER FILTER ANYMORE I DON’T THINK! JUST FIX THE FURNCE!

Kitty touches the box and reasons that it’s made out of hyperdense submolecular shift matrix alloy, which she can’t phase through. Except THIS version of Kitty was in a black room for 18 months focusing her time and energy on learning how to phase through hyperdense submolecular shift matrix alloys, I suppose. So she gives it a shot, but an alarm goes off.

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The baby’s got my hand! The baby’s got my hand!

Kitty keeps pressing forward, literally, even though it hurts so very, very badly. “I can feel him,” she says, learning nothing more than that there is a kid in the box.

Hisako and Wolvering amble down the hallways looking for Kitty, BUT THEN ORD AND ROBOT MEDUSA CRASH THROUGH THE ROOF RIGHT ON TOP OF THEM!! BLHRABRHAHRABLHABHB!!

Emma tells her crew to ignore that and keep on waiting. They’re almost there. Almost where? I’m not sure. But it ain’t Tahiti, my friends. It ain’t Tahiti.

Ord and Robot Medusa looks around the ruined hallway. The one they seek is around here somewhere…

A semi-conscious Wolverine lies supine on the floor in front of an open fridge. A beer can falls and bops him on the nose. He picks it up… looks at it… stares at it with a familiar menacing glare…

Robot Medusa’s impeccable tracking device is failing her. Peter Colossus must be somewhere…

Kitty recovers her child from Hell Box and runs off…

“Kitty, what are you doing?” Peter asks, stopping Kitty in the hallway.

“I did… what you wouldn’t… and I did it, Peter.”

We saw Kitty take a child, but Peter sees something different. Peter sees a giant fucking maggot. Peter sees Kitty lovingly clutching a giant fucking oozing dripping maggot.

“I saved our son.”

Peter looks, the eyes roll back in his head, and he flumps on the floor. Kitty drops the maggot and flumps on the floor alongside him.

The Hellfire Club enters and congratulates themselves on a job well done. Nova looks down at Kitty and feasts her eyes upon her new host body. “Be assured, I will take much better care of that hair.”

Then Wolverine shows up clean-shaven with different hair. Oh wait, it’s Cyclops. The art is so atrocious that I couldn’t tell! He has a gun. He shoots Emma, much to her surprise. Like, right in the stomach or something.

That’s it. That’s the end.

Final Thoughts

Cuckoo! Cuckoo! Chalk another one up for not knowing what’s going on at all, and furthermore, w–

$1850?? ALL YOU DID WAS OPEN THE FURNACE DOOR AND FROWN AT IT! GAAAH!!

Detective Comics (Vol. 1), Issue #657 – “Null and Void”

* Part 10 of 14 of the Batman: Prelude to Knightfall event *

Welcome to Loneliness & Cheeseburgers Presents: Detective Comics (Vol. 1), Issue #657 – “Null and Void”! In the previous installment of the Prelude to Knightfall story, Robin trains a guy named Jean-Paul Valley, “Azrael the Avenging Angel” to be a Good Guy instead of a Bad Guy. In the process, they bust a WayneCorp employee who has been selling copies of sensitive documents to biker gangs! So Robin and Azrael beat up every jerk in the building and save the day!

And where was Batman during all this? Unconscious on his Batcave steps, of course! Exhausted, fatigued, sleepy, burnt-out, he tries everything except go to bed! So he calls a doctor about a physical exam because he’d rather have a finger up his butt than a pillow against his head.

This reminds me of a personal anecdote: One day I w–


Detective Comics (Vol. 1), Issue #657 [March, 1993]
Written by: Chuck Dixon
“Null and Void”

Detective Comics (Vol. 1), Issue #657

Batman has been so tuckered out lately! Alfred has found him asleep in a chair still in his Batman costume. “This will not do at all, Master Bruce. That costume is not to be worn in the upstairs rooms.”

Do you think Bruce Wayne gives a shit? Bruce Wayne does not give a shit.

Alfred drags Bruce’s 900 pounds of pure muscle over to his cozy pink four-poster bed. The butler suggests that Bruce sleeps today. Bruce doesn’t wanna, he’s got so much to do with so little time to do it! Like beating up bad guys. And knitting a sweater.

If Bruce doesn’t go to bed this instant, Alfred threatens to let Tim Drake know that Bruce was cavorting around the upstairs in the Batman costume. Something that Bruce himself scolded Tim for not one or two issues ago! Plus, maybe he should hang up the Batman thing for a couple nights anyway. Wayne Enterprises’ stock is tanking and it’s because no one has actually seen Bruce Wayne out in daylight in roughly seventeen months.

“Do you hear the music?” says a man sticking his head out a high-rise window.

“I do! I do!” responds a man standing on a ledge ready to jump.

“And do you feel the wind through the trees?”

“I feel it!”

“And do you see your one true love waiting under the elm?”

“I see her! Yes! Yes!”

“WANDA!” he screams as he jumps and falls to his death. The man in the window takes out a pad and crosses a name off of his list of three names. The third name is “L. Fox” (the “L” stands for “Luxurious”!)

The next morning, Bruce meets up with Lucius who tells him that he looks like hell and smells like the worst of three butts. Bruce asks his fine feathered friend for something he can do – anything – that’ll take his mind off of his life. Lucius throws the man a hard hat; he’s got a project at WayneTech that he needs Bruce’s advise on. It’s an AI sex robot and he’s concerned that it’s not doing enough sex. Let’s go!

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Garth from Wayne’s World reporting for duty! Party on, sir!

Jean-Paul WhatsHisNuts is continuing to be a Good Boy at WayneTech with the whole security officer thing. He asks for a task more challenging than reviewing security tapes, but there are no tasks more challenging than that. Things are pretty boring around here. There are paper football tournaments!

“What about the break-ins at Wayne Plaza?” asks Jean-Paul.

“You know about that?” Sal asks.

“Only what I read in the daily reports.”

“You actually read those things?”

“You are changing the subject, Sal.”

Brrrt! Good point. Uh, let’s see… no, you’re not ready for Wayne Plaza break-in duty, son. Stick to the shit work and keep your fool mouth shut. Speaking of shutting up, here comes your boss.

Bruce and Lucius approach the kid with wide smiles! Bruce shakes the nerd’s hand and asks how the new job is suiting him. Jean-Paul doesn’t complain, he’s nice as pie. Sal is taken aback by Bruce’s familiarity with the little snot-nose. Now it all stinks of nepotism. Stinks to high heaven, and the stench is not Sal this time. He remembered his deodorant today.

Lucius shows Bruce the Echo Project. “It involves digital imaging and high-resolution video,” Lucius says proudly showing him the most pixelated JPEG that has ever been made. Lucius doesn’t know what this will all be for. All he knows that it’s a component of a much larger project, of which he also doesn’t know anything about yet. But that stuff doesn’t matter right now! What Lucius needs right now is Bruce’s help getting contracts for other components of this mystery job with the mystery components that even the guy who’s spearheading the project doesn’t know anything about, apparently. Please don’t fire me, sir.

One guy in particular needs sweet-talkin’, and Bruce can sweet-talk his way out of an orgy that he himself started. Bruce accepts the task.

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Don’t let me interrupt your calisthenics, Robin.

Elsewhere, Jean-Paul aka Azrael meets up with Robin for some more of that training that Robin is so bad at. Azrael tells him all about the Wayne Plaza break-ins, so he wants to scan for weak points in the alarm systems. Robin lambasts him for wanting to do Security’s job, asks him if he needs the overtime. Azrael tells Robin to cork it and come on. So they do, all right. They do a lot of coming on.

Azrael has a cool idea on how to get past the security cameras! He has a giant 80-pound camcorder with an even bigger satellite dish that he will use to record boring footage and then loop it into the security camera so that all it shows is the boring footage (a bunny eating a carrot, for example). “The security men watching will see what is going on the tape rather than what is going on live,” Azrael mansplains to his dummy companion. Robin thinks it’s a good idea, but someone already beat him to it. That means someone’s already inside. Which means cake and ice cream has been delayed.

That evening, Bruce meets up with their government contact, Roth, to schmooze with a dinner of duck and a pleasant smile. Roth tells them that the project is so secret that WayneTech isn’t getting every component of the job. The work has been separated into the three sections and a different company is working on each one: WayneTech, GE Aerospace, and Burger King. And the end components will be assembled at a military facility where all personnel will chomp on cyanide pills and shoot themselves in the dick upon completion. Bruce chuckles at the wryness of the project! Bravo, sir! I salute you!

Robin and Azrael infiltrate the plaza and beat up some hooded bad dudes who are trying to do something unclear. One of them has a chainsaw, which is very loud and it’s waking up all the babies. Sounds like Robin and Azrael should be killed handily. Let’s return to the action in just a moment.

Roth assures Bruce that he wishes WayneTech could have taken on the entire project, but his hands are tied. They can’t take any chances. How are they supposed to blow up the moon with a moon laser if WayneTech knows it’s a moon laser? Whoops!

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Like in a candlelit bubblebath with a good porn rag. They just came out with the new “Fuck Sluts” monthly.

Bruce sees Roth off and considers this a wasted-ass evening. He could have played Batman tonight! Such bullshit. Good thing Robin is out there at least, he thinks, not knowing that his ward is about to get decapitated.

Somehow, though, Azrael gets the upper hand! He has stolen the chainsaw and is threatening the bad dude with it. Getting it really close to his eyeball. “You want to kill me?” Azrael asks coldly. “Go ahead! Try! Come on! Try and kill me!”

Robin stops Azrael before he can fill the guy’s skull full of chainsaw. Too bad, too, because that would have made for some compelling comic book-writin’. Instead, Robin kicks the chainsaw out of Azrael’s hand even though that’s the most dangerous thing anyone could do in this situation. Jesus, kid.

“We’re not killers!” Robin reminds Azrael.

“Lost control… I was going to murder him…” Azrael says, rubbing a temple. He worries that his programming runs too deep and that he might not be able to change.

“You’ll get a handle on it,” Robin assures the dork. “Batman believes in you. So do I.”

OH, WELL! ROBIN BELIEVES IN YOU! THAT’S GOT TO BE WORTH THE TOILET PAPER YOU WIPED YOUR ASS WITH THIS MORNING!

Anyway, time to boogie. They hit the alarms and get out of there while all the bad guys lie unconscious like dogs.

The hypnotist guy from earlier, the one with the list, he knocks off the next name by convincing the guy he’s a schoolboy running off to class in the middle of traffic. “The mama’s boys are always the easiest. So eager to please,” he says as the victim gets creamed by a semi-truck. Only Lucius Fox is left on the list, and that guy is dispensable. Seriously, go for it. No one’s gonna care.

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Joke’s on you, bud. School’s out for the summer. School’s out forever.

The ringleader of the whole Let’s-Steal-from-Wayne-Plaza-LOL plan gets interrogated at the 43rd precinct by Harvey “fat and unwashed” Bullock. It wasn’t Batman this time who administered the punishment beatings, oh no. It was Robin and some nutjob who swung a chainsaw around like he owned the place (and the place was the Chainsaw Store). And Bullock’s like “Some nutjob, eh? Sounds suspicious! There aren’t any nutjobs in Gotham!”

Meanwhile, an officer who is surveilling the interrogation shows Sal a bald, hypnotizing, list-having man checking into the building right now on another screen…

Bruce and Lucius visit the first guy’s grave. The guy who jumped out of the window screaming for Wanda. Something makes Lucius uneasy, but he can’t put his finger on it…

Oh yeah, he knows what it is now? Being played by Morgan Freeman in the movies? That dude is old as shit!

Final Thoughts

I don’t care much for Lucius Fox. I hope the mysterious hypnotist man throws him into a wood chipper.

And Robin’s a punk. Throw his ass in there too.

And Batman. Let’s just woodchip the shit out of the whole city.

Season 9, Episode 10 – “Realty Bites”

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“Realty Bites”

Original Air Date:
December 7, 1997
Directed by:
Swinton O. Scott III
Written by:

Dan Greaney

QUICK SYNOPSIS

Marge becomes a real-estate agent.

POINTLESS GUEST STAR(S)

None! And if you think Phil Hartman is pointless then your face should get acquainted with my brass-knuckled fist.

WHY THIS EPISODE SUCKS

It doesn’t, this is one of the highlights of Season 9. People who are naysayers about Marge-centric episodes can eat my butt. Hello? “Marge on the Lamb”? “Marge in Chains”? And it’s not outlandish for Marge to get a job as a realtor. She was a power plant employee in “Marge Gets a Job”, a cop in “The Springfield Connection”, and she sold pretzels in “The Twisted World of Marge Simpson”. Again, eat my butt.

Homer’s a bit of a jerkass, as he will increasingly become as the seasons wear on, but his B-plot is kept to a minimum while the main realty plot is kept at the forefront. In any case, his brawl with Snake on top of a speeding car reminds me of why the show is starting to slip, but I can’t help but find charm elsewhere like the whole Murder House plot in Act 3 with the Flanders family. Does anyone else think of “Bart of Darkness” with this one?

The sad fact of this episode is that this is Phil Hartman’s last speaking role as Lionel Hutz, who kills it in this episode as a longtime incompetent lawyer who seems to be semi-competent at real estate. At least enough where he should probably consider it a fulltime job. He uses his lawyerly spin to show Marge a shitty book of available houses on the market: small = cozy; dilapidated = rustic; on fire = motivated seller!

“Realty Bites” introduces Gil, a dead ringer for Shelley “The Machine” Levene! Obviously, the whole idea was to make a hapless character based entirely off of Jack Lemmon’s character from Glengarry Glen Ross and it was splendidly done. Ol’ Gil used to have it in him, but now he’s pathetic. This character should have been one-and-done, but they literally brought him back dozens of times as the “guy who sucks and keeps getting new jobs”. He was brilliant in this episode, and otherwise overplayed.

Great jokes include the Lumber King’s ass-shaking billboard, Ned Flanders yelling about purple drapes, and George Bush collecting unemployment checks. The worst joke is Kirk Van Houten losing his arm while driving through the taut piano wire. It smacks of a Treehouse of Horror joke that felt out of place. Didn’t like it!

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IMDb TRIVIA FUNHOUSE!

The episode marks the first appearance of Gil Gunderson and Cookie Kwan. Excuses were made by the writers to bring back Gil in future episodes based on Dan Castellaneta’s performance at the table read, which proved popular with the staff.
You know it’s not the best idea when you have to use a phrase like “excuses were made”. Sounds like the credo of Zombie Simpsons to me.

The piano wire scene was meant to end with Kirk’s sandwich being sliced just the way he wanted, until George Meyer suggested that his arm be cut off instead. Mike Scully described the ensuing laughter at his suggestion as the most intense he had ever heard from the staff, saying: “They were literally choking because the joke was so unexpected. It was a shocked kind of laugh, and it just started rolling, one of those laughs that build the more they reverberate through you.”
The staff are a bunch of morons.


FINAL GRADE
A-